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No Light {CH1} - Bajeebers - 07-07-2009
NO LIGHT
Finding yourself was never easy, but when you have a twisted past with winding roads that tempt you with every step, what exactly are you supposed to do?
Finding yourself was never easy, but when you have a twisted past with winding roads that tempt you with every step, what exactly are you supposed to do?
-[Prologue]-
"Let me go!"...
I've been hearing those 3 words my whole life. Echoing in the back of my head.
Those are the last words I remember from my broken past. What else do I remember? My life being invaded. Broken. Shattered into pieces until it was impossible to put back together. It sliding to me. The sound that exploded around us. Life.. is something that I haven't been able to be normal at.
...Zach, worldwide renowned thief, at your service.
-[CHAPTER ONE - That Fateful Day]-
I awoke to the light of the sun. Rubbing my eyes violently, I made my way over to the bathroom. I turned on the tap, put some cold water in my hands, and practically threw it at my face. The coldness always made me feel fresh and woken up.
I made my way down the stairs lightly, not to wake up my snoring father. I solid snake style crawled across the floor and appeared at the table, stealthily pushing out a chair and sitting on it. There was already milk and cereal on the table, and I filled myself to my content. This is how my life has been for the past 2 years, with the occasional outing with family and friends. At least.. that's how it was.
It was 3:15pm. I remember it clearly. My.. mom.. she was packing up her weapons. My.. dad, trying to stop her from going.. the gun sliding to me the way it did. What I did. The sound that exploded around us. Two souless bodies lying in a pool of their own blood. This is how it started.
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Hdoes it sound right now? It's gonna center around drama, finding out about yourself, and that things aren't always what they seem. It's also gonna have places from RO.
RE: No Light {CH1} - Galt - 07-07-2009
Sounds dramatic and ended with a cliffhanger. Very good.
RE: No Light {CH1} - Bajeebers - 07-07-2009
Thanks! I'll try and make chapter two.