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A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Snapplewee - 10-02-2009
Waiting on the table
The pain consumes my mind
I worry for my health
Needle in my arm
Will this go away?
Enters my Angel
My beautiful everything
Radiant, she's glowing
Warm, she's loving
She's there for me
At my side
She holds my hand as another dose is given
Seeing the love she has for me
My Angel, blessing me.
After the removal
Underneath the knife
Immobile by choice
Until your guiding hand arrives
Angel your wings give me flight
Loving and strong, you carry me away
Radiant, Angel
Never stop loving me
Just an FYI, my song lyrics never really have a rhyme structure. It is very free form and is written for my music, which is progressive. This song is nearly 20 minutes long, and the words fit the music. Judge the words, figure out the story, don't worry about the structure.
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Story Teller - 10-02-2009
o.O
The story is about someone who is depress and wants to escape reality. He fantasize about the angel which symbolizes both the beginning and the end of his life. But to simplify it, he is using some stuff to go to his happy place :D
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Silk - 10-03-2009
I saw it as someone who attempted suicide and is now drugged up in a hospital, the angel either being death or a nurse.
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Snapplewee - 10-03-2009
Wow!
I wasn't expecting that. I want to see if more people respond before I tell the story.
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Kenshiro-san - 10-03-2009
I don't know... much, I take a long time to analyze poems/songs, and am usually wrong. However, I'm taking a wild swing at it.
I saw it from the female point of view.
It seemed based on teen pregnancy. The girl was a drug user, and wanted, as Silk suggested ((very cleverly and it fit the poem quite well)), to commit suicide, with painkillers ((I've heard you inject some...? Sorry, not up to date on drugging methods... Haven't studied the matter in ages.))
Taken to the hospital, her parents find out, the doctor(s) inject more painkillers ((yes it has happened where I am from >>;; Doctors worry about the child inside, not the person with it.)), and the baby is aborted. However, she dies of an overdose. The angel that guides her is her child, murdered, but still loving of his/her mother.
Again, a wild guess, but hopefully it fits...?
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Snapplewee - 10-08-2009
last year in March I underwent a routine surgery that went horribly wrong. The song is about the time I spent in the hospital, how I felt. I didn't want anything. I felt so miserable and I didn't care. The angel is my girlfriend, who was in my room and helping me more than the nurses. She was there from when I told her I was in the ER, and she was the one who took me home when I was released. She stayed by my side even when I was being a jerk to her. She forced me to get up and walk (which I was told to do) and helped me get up and down when I needed too.
This song is about how wonderful she is to me.
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Story Teller - 10-08-2009
that was unexpected o.O
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - Kenshiro-san - 10-18-2009
XD Lol was I off... XD
I guess you can see here how different people can have different interpretations of the same thing?
Nice story though