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Brave Young Hearts~ By Saiichi Bloodbane
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RE: Brave Young Hearts~ By Saiichi Bloodbane
Saiichi remained on the floor till nightfall,his pride soiled and his body hurt he slowly dragged himself towards the tree where he usualy slept, he managed to arive at the tree and he leaned his back on it barely as he took a deep breath and fell uncouncious...His body exausted and ragged from such a busy day,seemed to him like heaven to be back at home, and he faintly smirked as the soft night time breaze passed on the tree gently moving the leavis and making a soft rustling sound, a young man with a hunter's outfit lifts him and carries him over to the nearby hospital.
"Stupid Saii making me do these kind of things...Baka.."
As they arrive the hospital, many people are amazed and start whispering to each other.
The young man notices the people were talking to eachother and he asks one of the Priests as they are tending to Saii's wounds.
"Well, theres a rumor that those bandits didnt relly kill the vagabond,since there was no archer among them and the animal had many arrows on it,also note the arrows had S.B. Initials.so the people are saying it was Him, Saiichi Bloodbane, whom killed the vagabond wolf."

The young man sighs loudly while leaning back with his hands on the back of his neck.
"Oh man just great, he managed to pass the super impossible task master Icarus gave him so he wouldnt ever become a hunter..JUST GREAT!!! HES GONNA FLIP WHEN HE HEARS THE TROUBLE MAKER PASSED!! ARGH!!"He yelled out as he kicked a nearby garbage can.

The Priest looks at the young man and pulls him by the shirt,"Kiriashi san this is a hospital, you arent allowed to be yelling in here comprende?" She said to him in an angry like calm tone that would scare any man instantly.

He pulls his shirt from her and walks outside.
"Stupid Saii, I hope he doesn't f*** up as a hunter."
The young man walks off into the dark cold night as the nurse looks at him from the window.And one of the other nurses places her hand on her shoulder.
"That brother of mine is sure a meany..Stupid Kiriashi"

Back at prontera~

A Green warm light envelops Aneko entirely as 4 high priestesses were focusing their healing energies on her,and she slowly opens her eyes, she looks around her at the priests that were happy and relieved that she was healed and well...soon after her eyes close slowly and she falls asleep once more.

Faint Voice in the distance:
"So she cleared it eh...Fine, I approve, Let her Join the clergy..."
"Yes Your Majesty, as you wish"

Meanwhile in a far away land beyond the sky, very far away....

A winged woman in golden armor sitting on a golden throne with servant winged people left to right and right to left bring her various food's that she rejects with a simple wave of the hand, she seemed bored and was holding a crystal like water sphere that glowed oddly.she got a glance at Saii whom was resting on a hospital bed covered in bandages and then she saw Aneko resting on a royal bed covered in bandages also.

"Those kids...this might be quite amusing after all"
Her mouth opened and a crackle laughter wretched and loud echoed through the halls sending all the servants into panic and flying away.Her laughter echoed as two gigantic golden doors swung close slowly and closed her in, then the loud bang of the doors and silence lingered..


~4 Years later..~

A Large brown falcon, larger than the average falcon with a red lace on its neck flies on the fields nearby Payon,it notices a rustling in the grass and immediately plunges to it.As the falcon plunged with its claws ready to strike at the grassy spot A Young Man leaps up from the spot, grabs the falcon and nuzzles it as the bird happily makes affectionate chirping noises.Saiichi now an adult,sporting traditional hunter gear, taller, his hair is longer,His Body slim build but well toned muscle wise, his beloved dark blinker in place and his green hat his master entrusted him with as a graduation gift,alongside his new companion Suzy his trusted falcon, he was indeed a successful hunter.
He was heading back to town since he was done with his training and many animals would come out of hiding to greet him as he was the new guardian of the forest.

"Hey Saii!!" in the distance another fellow hunter of a much higher status than him ran towards him at fast pace.
"Oh jeez not again..."Saiichi said to himself as the young hunter made a signal towards him and his bird charged, only to be stopped by Suzy in mid air and the birds engaged into a fight.
Saii Grips his fist and runs charging at the guy, swings only to be dodged gracefully and the guy lands a spin kick on Saii's back sending him flying and crashing face first on the grass.

"Sloppy as ever i can see" He said in a melodic mocking tone.
Saii in anger grabs a rock and flings it at the young man whom catches it and chucks it up and down in his hand.
"What do you want Heii!?"Saii Snarled angrily at him for ruining his perfect good day.
"Woa Woa There bro chillax,im here on an errand from Icarus.He said he wants to talk to you now."
"Eh? What did i do now?"
"Apparently its involving that fight we had in town the other day,remember you kinda broke 13 windows?" Heii cringed as he said it.
"WOA HOLD ON MAN!!!! YOU STARTED THE FIGHT REMEMBER?!"
"well...Ahaha I gotta go! My my look at the time, MY GUILD NEEDS ME LATER AHAHAHA!!!" He said as he darted running in the complete oposite direction of town.

Saii saw him run into the distance till he vanished in the woods, then looked in the direction of town.

*Chapter Ending theme softly starts playing gradually adjusting to a normal volume : God Knows - Aya Hirano *
(Author's Note : Please Look it up and coment if it was a good choice for the story, I think it is but i wanna know the reader's Opinion.Also the fact that the song isnt being used in any Anime intro nor ending makes it a free choice in case the story would to progress in later stages.I.E. Fan made anime and etc.)

Saii stood there in the middle of the field as his bird gently flew and landed on his leather padded shoulder.The wind blows gently swaying his hair as the bird nuzzles onto his cheek.He stood there contemplating the town in the distance for a long while ,the town he started off in and so many both good and bad memories took place ever since he was accepted as a resident.
"Theres nothing else for me here in payon..."
The Bird looks at him puzzled and looks at the town as the soft wind blows some of its feather into movement.
"I wonder how is that Aneko girl doing back in prontera.."He said as he stared into the clouds and he remembers that day...

Back In Prontera ~

A young girl in a clerical dress holding a pink umbrella covering half her upper body stares off into the sky as the wind blows and her Golden blonde hair sways in the air.

"I Wonder how is that boy i met in payon doing.." Another Priest like girl shoves her from the back and both fall into a flower patch laughing.

"Sakurato you meany!" She said as she threw a bunch of flowers at her.Both Girls Laugh and continue throwing flowers at each other and the echo of their voices slowly faints away, the viewpoint flies over to the sky as time seems to slow down in epicness never seen in an anime before as the screen slowly fades into black.*and the music slowly fades away with the screen*

A Gigantic white Text Appears on the black screen making a loud bang sound.
"TO BE CONTINUED"
Never forget the old days.
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RE: Brave Young Hearts~ By Saiichi Bloodbane - by Bloodbane - 08-11-2009, 11:09 PM

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