I don't see any problems with your drawing Kenshiro. Your concepts are pretty amazing, but the things that you should avoid doing that many amateur artist do is hide the other eye and the hands. Although this technique is use when making a manga, but it doesnt work as an illustration art.
btw, that last pic you have there... It is just weird that I drew something similar before @_@
(This post was last modified: 10-11-2009, 07:48 PM by Story Teller.)