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My character background, Feedback please
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RE: My character background, Feedback please
You capitalize a few things that are somewhat unnecessary. Your grammar is also kinda messy at best; you know what you want to say, but you kinda screw it up. May or may not be mary-sueish - An accomplished hunter at age 15? Really?
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03-18-2010, 06:44 PM
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RE: My character background, Feedback please - by Revenant - 03-18-2010, 06:44 PM

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