That's not a failure story. D: I love it!
And your gettin better hiro~
*Update!*
Story and myself where having a chat on MSN over what to do for some of the comics. Story gave me the idea of this short mini series. I <3 making food for people.
D:
It's abit blurry. I plan to lineart it and at least tone it. I'm liking the way the short plot is going.