Beliefs

[ShadowValentine]

I see little errors in your work, but they're very small, nothing that can't be caused by fatigue or it just being your own work, which means you see what you expected to type, and not what you actually did type. It is much better than anything I've come to expect from non-professional works, especially on the Internet. If you want, I'll pick out the errors I saw and put 'em here.

This seems like it's building to be quite the story. If you included perhaps a background information part, for example, an index at the end of sorts to explain what non-Ragnarok players would not understand, you could, perhaps, try and get this published?

It certainly seems to be of sufficient quality and (perhaps) length for a book...