Meech and her art~!

[Keii]

Hehe, I thought the thing about the left side of the face too, Motenai. I also noticed the wink looked a smidge further down than it would were she really shutting an eye, and I helped her with it earlier today. The emotion could go a bit more in the direction of the attitude that comes with a casual wink, but I do like it. I think it's obvious her attention is directed at the viewer, honestly, and I think the neck might be a bit long, but it's hardly anything out of the ordinary for a style like this, and has no negative impact on the drawing. I have to say, though, this IS a traditional bust of the character, and the matter of arms is entirely irrelevant. The cloak does look a bit blown in the wind, and I'm pretty sure the hair follows that pattern, even though it's also in the style of the hair to feather out that way.

If I could offer any more advice for you, peach, it'd be to consider the shape of the skull more when you draw hair, as this seems lopsided to the point of being rather curious, and to keep experimenting with this style, as it seems you're making pretty good leaps and bounds but you've still got a ways to really nailing it down.