Desolation (My Pokémon Fan Fic!)

[bugaboo]

Lol that's fucked.

Not a bad story.??The colours kind of threw me off more than once- especially with the yellow, which I can't even read unless I highlight it.??Aside from some grammar/typos, I don't really see anything wrong with it.??However, how is he narrating the story if he's dead???That's the one thing I don't get about horror stories and it drives me nuts.

Creepy concept. Wtf demented Pokemon. I've dreamed all of my life of being a Pokemon trainer and then you introduce this thing here. RUINING MY CHILDHOOD, AUX.

All in all, 6/10. Might eat again.