Custom Homunculus

[kyoshiro421]

I do understand that fixing existing problems are much more important than adding new stuff. I don't expect this idea to be added anytime soon, heck I don't expect this idea would be added anyway. I'm just glad people are actually giving attention to this idea.

Now that the possibility of custom homunculus to exist has been proven, on to my idea.

My idea wasn't really connected to the Allegiance system (although that's a good idea, too.). I also have a storyline about it in mind. So, here goes *nothing*..

In the distant future...

Doctor ________, a robot specialist, had spent all his life creating his best masterpiece, 2 robots: Each specialized in one field, Offense and Defense, to defeat __________________ and save humanity. Though, to give life and power to his creations, he needs _________, an ancient stone which was said to be 10 times stronger than the Philosopher's stone. But the day came when ____________ knew about his plan...

*CRAAASSSHHH*
"Doctor! The HQ is being attacked by __________! We must evacuate quickly!"
"....."
"...........Is this the end.......?"

*Warning: An intruder has infiltrated the territory. Please calm down, the security is currently taking- * *BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM*

"Doctor! They are already inside! WE MUST EVACUATE NOW!"
"........"
"Doctor! Doctor! Can you hear me?!"
"........All my life I dreamed of defeating ________ and end his reign..."
"......I was so close..........."
"DAMN YOU ____________!!!!!!"
"......"

"Doctor, I understand your feelings but we must leave now!"
"...I...shall die in this place.."
*Door opens*
"Father!"
"...Huh?"
"Father! Quick! Get in the time machine! I'll send you _____ years from now!"
"Huh? (we have a time machine?! O_O) But what about my creations.."
"You can bring them with you! The time machine is big enough (duh o.o), YOU MUST HURRY BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!"

*RAAAAAWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRR*
"DOCTOR ____________... WHERE ARE YOU.........?!?!?!"

"Quick Father! You're our only hope.. please.."
"........." "...Okay.. Let's do this!"

"Sending you ______ in the past in 5..."

*CRASHH* "THERE YOU ARE! YOU CAN'T GET AWAY FROM ME! GET THEM MY MINIONS!"

"Gah! I'll hold them up, you guys protect the time machine!"
"Roger!"

"Grrr... ___________, my father will be back.. He will save us all!"
"LIES!" *shoots evil beam* ( >.> )

"...4"
"......3"
"............2"
"................1"
*ting*
"Have a nice trip." *everything turns light*

"....Ugh..."
"....Huh?"
"...Where am I?"

And that's about it, not a very good writer though. Hey, it's fun =p. That was a long post... Anyway, what I had in mind was custom *robot* homunculus, one good in offense (Pretty much like fliir), and one good at defense (Amistr). Discuss please ><.