"Bright Eyes"

[Bloodbane]

Story Teller Wrote:I'm confused... I thought the curse eyes prevented her to see well, but how did she find out the colour of Sebi's hair? But what's more important is that I wanna know what happened to the Siroma called "Maki Maki" D:

Edit: Oh, and nice story btw. I don't know what is missing, but I feel like there's some gaps in the story or maybe I'm just tired because it's 3 am

she is rolling back and forth in the story, <<
try to gain the point of view of the writer and logical thinking.
then youl enjoy what the writer is trying to portrait.