The Asura of Light

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RE: The Asura of Light

You abuse commas a little too much, and appear to have difficulty with your grammar.

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04-17-2010 07:23 AM

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The Asura of Light - Kaizer - 04-16-2010, 11:20 AM

RE: The Asura of Light - Revenant - 04-17-2010 07:23 AM