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Loading Sceen I want opinions - Arion - 01-19-2008 05:57 PM
Jus playing around really. Please comment
EDIT- Fixed Taek Outline
EDIT2-Fixed Picture Transition
EDIT3-Made Text Look uber
![[Image: heroed1.jpg]](http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2866/heroed1.jpg)
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Général_Argos - 01-19-2008 06:03 PM
great
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Loveless - 01-19-2008 06:20 PM
Good
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Arion - 01-19-2008 06:25 PM
any suggestions? Like different phrases or something
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - GM-Pandora - 01-19-2008 06:25 PM
It's nice. I would however be careful with the white transparency on the tk image ^_^
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Arion - 01-19-2008 06:30 PM
I guess i could fine tune that little bit out
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Kadar - 01-19-2008 07:17 PM
The phrase "Only one chance" should either be completely in the lower picture or completely in the top picture so it is easier to read. Maybe all of the text could use a black outline for increased visibility. The white transparency stuff should probably be fixed as well. Notice the transparent holes in the M_TK's knee, F_TK's chest and legs, and the book behind them both. All of that should be filled in with white.
Needs a bit of polish but otherwise it's nice.
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Rika - 01-19-2008 07:22 PM
Pretty good, I'd recommend a better transition between the pictures, maybe even a simple blur.
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Arion - 01-19-2008 07:30 PM
I'll figure out something about that Rika...and I made another one lol
![[Image: hero2vt5.jpg]](http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7241/hero2vt5.jpg)
RE: Loading Sceen I want opinions - Rika - 01-19-2008 07:44 PM
Awesomes, I'm assuming you added the wings? You should comment on a couple loading screens I did a month ago, I love advice <3
Here
Its probably a couple pages in since I don't think I updated the front page with it o_o