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A song I wrote- "My Angel"
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A song I wrote- "My Angel"
Waiting on the table
The pain consumes my mind
I worry for my health
Needle in my arm
Will this go away?

Enters my Angel
My beautiful everything
Radiant, she's glowing
Warm, she's loving
She's there for me

At my side
She holds my hand as another dose is given
Seeing the love she has for me
My Angel, blessing me.

After the removal
Underneath the knife
Immobile by choice
Until your guiding hand arrives

Angel your wings give me flight
Loving and strong, you carry me away
Radiant, Angel
Never stop loving me



Just an FYI, my song lyrics never really have a rhyme structure. It is very free form and is written for my music, which is progressive. This song is nearly 20 minutes long, and the words fit the music. Judge the words, figure out the story, don't worry about the structure.
(This post was last modified: 10-02-2009, 12:37 PM by Snapplewee.)
10-02-2009, 12:35 PM
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A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Snapplewee - 10-02-2009, 12:35 PM
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Story Teller - 10-02-2009, 04:30 PM
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Silk - 10-03-2009, 11:02 AM
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Snapplewee - 10-03-2009, 01:37 PM
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Kenshiro-san - 10-03-2009, 02:07 PM
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Snapplewee - 10-08-2009, 02:17 PM
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Story Teller - 10-08-2009, 04:38 PM
RE: A song I wrote- "My Angel" - by Kenshiro-san - 10-18-2009, 07:18 PM

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